04 January 2006
sanetwin
» First Impression: Pretty, girly and simple. Links lined up well, and an easy-to-read background. Took me a bit to sift out where the link was. Cute picture of you!
» Content [60/60]: Since you have the 'random entry' feature on your site, I got the entries for my review through that. I read your mini-bio and 200 things for some background first, and I think we'd get along in real life; we have a lot in common.
All the entries I read had a very strong sense of self-possession; you are very self-aware and articulate. You capture the human condition (not just yours) very well. You display a great range of emotion and your writing is very charismatic. I felt a lot of empathy reading your posts. You shared a lot of yourself and that's sometimes very difficult to do. I couldn't have asked for more. Please keep writing; you're an inspiration.
» Errors [20/20]: You were good. Good capitalization, punctuation, spelling. I didn't see any errors.
» Mechanics [18/20]: Pretty easy on the eyes. I've seen a lot worse. It definitely has your thumb print on it, so bonus points for that. My browser resolution wasn't quite big enough for your tables, but it's okay; it didn't make it hard to read. In fact, it was very clear; the column of options to the right is good. I like the little blurb about you at the top.
» Best Line: "I don't have everything I may need or want and someone I love may be hurting. But I can still eat this yummy toast and I still have lovely kisses from my baby girl and beautiful weather. And that counts right?
"It does count.
"I need to remember that.
"It's so fucking hard to."
- from Learning to just be content
» Best Entry: why he's not a hopeless cause
» Repeat Visits: Definitely.
» Bottom Line: A wonderful read. A very good note to start on. A perfect way to kick off a new site.
» Total Score: [98/100] - A
Jessica at 3:10 pm